tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-526921096003687520.post8479747039484325221..comments2010-06-10T11:08:18.748-06:00Bloodleggerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08607615711743319233noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-526921096003687520.post-11755680985282752252010-06-10T11:08:18.735-06:002010-06-10T11:08:18.735-06:00Wow! Bill is quite the guy. Have fun with this today.inesteRobert C. Nelsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-526921096003687520.post-18449418642104050822010-06-10T05:51:41.708-06:002010-06-10T05:51:41.708-06:00Actually, the length is not bad here. Very interesting and reads fast.<br /><br />I like Bill Knox and am a little jealous that you like your character. I don&#39;t care for Regina too much because she&#39;s got a huge chip on her shoulder. Bill will have his hands full.<br /><br />Great character development!! This really helps me with both the story and Regina&#39;s interaction with Bill. Will do the same for you and our readers by Monday.<br /><br />Oh, and I have a feeling we&#39;ll get a lot done on the first couple parts of the story today.W.J. Howardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10083714993699730186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-526921096003687520.post-58907399368998646242010-06-10T05:18:45.966-06:002010-06-10T05:18:45.966-06:00You can create a separate page and link to it from the post. Off to read.W.J. Howardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10083714993699730186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-526921096003687520.post-53194882856132412912010-06-10T00:03:24.140-06:002010-06-10T00:03:24.140-06:00Clearly we need to break long posts with a &quot;read more&quot; on the front page...R.J. Robynhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14656494917008970944noreply@blogger.com